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it is suggested that all young adult should undertake a period of unpaid work to help people in the community . Does it bring more benefits to the community and the young people than draw backs?

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In today's materialistic era young
people
 are busy with their carrier growth and developing skills. Some
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people
 are doing volunteer
work
 . but as in my ,opinion
charity
 or voluntary
work
also
 helps to develop a carrier as well as the quality of life.
To begin
 with, every young
person
 has to do unpaid
work
 for the community because it helps them as well as social and
also
 motivates other
people
 to do it. when youngsters interact with voluntarily
work
 they interact with other
people
 which develop their communication skill .some
time
 to raise the money they
also
 organise fundraising program so, it helps to develop soft skills. ,
also
 some organisations help poor students to provide free tuition classes by helping young
people
 share their knowledge. Elder
people
 always say that "If you share your knowledge with others it's increased". some companies or organizations recruit a
person
 by seeing their contributing
charity
 or volunteering
work
also
. On the other side, by
charity
 ,
work
 many
people
 get help but, in some ,cases it is seen that they depend on it and always excepting help from others . so, it is a drawback of
charity
work
.sometimes
time
 a
person
 or
people
 that much involved in social
work
 distract or do not grow personally. it is not happening in every case. it men not that someone has to distract by
charity
 but if you did not get
time
 for it. do it monthly,weekly or sometimes
time
 hourly.
Lastly
, I suggest that there are more benefits of voluntary
work
 in spite of the drawback and every young
person
 have to do it in their free
time
 because it motivates others and because of it
person
 get goodwill in society.
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