Social media marketing can influence what consumers buy. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree?

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Advertising
companies
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these days are being very creative in order to attract customers to purchase their
products
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. Some believe that social
media
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marketing is influencing
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consumer choices,
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, there are other methods of advertising that may have similar effects.
Firstly
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, social
media
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is widely used and most
companies
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are already using
this
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platform to advertise their
products
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. Mobile users who are heavily engaged in these
media
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are easily influenced to buy many of the advertised
products
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.
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, beauty
products
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companies
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pick Facebook and Instagram pages to promote their
products
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which allows them to target their content towards their preferred audiences
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the female cohorts. It is clear that using social
media
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as a way of marketing may strongly influence
consumers
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to buy certain
products
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. Even though social
media
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may be a very popular marketing strategy,
television
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marketing
do
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equally influence what
consumers
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buy. Fast food advertisements,
for example
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, display colourful and tempting pictures of food that
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viewers to purchase junk food.
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,
instead
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of eating
healthy
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a healthy
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meal
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,
consumers
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are negatively influenced by attractive advertisements on
television
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to buy their
meal
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.
Although
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social
media
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marketing influences what
consumers
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buy, there are other effective marketing tools
such
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as
television
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advertising that could play
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role. Advertising
companies
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may attract a plethora of customers by promoting their videos and pictures
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social
media
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as well as
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television
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on television
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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