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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawback

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Nowadays,Students are finding it better to select universities with other provenance.So, Whoever gets a chance opts for it for their great exposure to the outside world & the quality of the education.In my opinion,doing so have a more positive impact rather than a negative one.
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, Whenever any student decides to go for higher studies in any other university which is not in his mother country,
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 decision is derived from the ambition of achieving the desired targets in some specific field. Youngsters who choose to go to other territory keep some points in mind while they select
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, which is of course that wherever they are going that area is more developed than the current place where they are studying.
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 considered that developed countries have more good infrastructure, good employment ratio, and better education systems with the kind of good pay security.
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,the bright pupil who decides to learn and settle in economically strong kingdoms has vast possibilities of getting the required support from the system in terms of job,investments,technological advancement and political stability.
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,most of the time underdeveloped countries lost their best talent due to the lack of these things. Overall, if we see that for those students whoever is having big plans and they have the ability to make difference in society, for them choosing a foreign university over the native ones is overweight the drawback that if they remain in the same place wherever they are it
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 would have that benefit from the intelligence of those minds.
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