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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books becuse they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statment?

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In recent decades, there are a vast revolution in the publications including newspapers ,
books
 ,Articles and Journals.
However
, in the future, there are many
people
 who read either newspapers or
books
 will prefer online products more than
a paper versions
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a paper version
paper versions
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. In
this
 essay, I will give my opinion about
this
 issue. In general, online publications are favourable for society and they will be more dependent on them because the future will become for online operations.
Also
, the culture of unprinted newspapers or
books
 was being distributed around the whole world.
For instance
 , in my period of study at university,
firstly
 I was dependent on printed
books
 but with pass time I changed my opinion and prefered online
books
 because it is easy to get them and it saves more money. So I think all
people
 will depend on unprinted versions.
Therefore
, there are some
people
 who never have money to get any printed copy, they will always depend on online printed. I know many
people
 who are for
waiting
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forwaiting
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 specific
books
 and journals will be online because they do have not enough money to get them,so the future of unprinted copies is clear than printed copies. Overall, in my opinion , I think that the unprinted versions will be helped communities to get it in an easy way and without any payment.
Therefore
, it will be incented
people
 to read and will increase their level of knowledge.
Also
, I think the number of publications will be increased in all variety majors.
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