The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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As illustrated in the pie charts are the details on the
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band of
population
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the population
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in one European and Asian country as recorded in the year 2000 and projections for 2050.
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, it is evident that three
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groups
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as 0-14, 15-59 and 60 plus
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were considered. In 2000, 0-14
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was recorded as the
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band with the highest proportion for
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, as against being the least for Italy.
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, in 2050 it is projected that
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and Italy will document
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the 15
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-59
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age
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group
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as the highest.
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with, in the year 2000
Yemen
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recorded its' lowest populated
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group
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to be 3.6% for sixty plus
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and highest as
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group
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0-14
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group
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at a little above half.
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, Italy noted the least
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cohort as 0-14 at a little less than a fifth and
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populous as sixty plus at 61.6%.
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, as projected for the year 2050, the most populous
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group
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for
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and Italy will be 15-59
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at 57.3% and 46.2% respectively.
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, the smallest
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population for
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is 60+
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at 5.7%, as against 11.5% for 0-14 in Italy

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, years, yemen, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • age distribution
  • population skewed
  • younger age groups
  • significant proportion
  • older population
  • projected
  • demographics
  • societal and economic challenges
  • youthful population
  • growing workforce
  • economic growth
  • aging population
  • demand for healthcare
  • pension systems
  • invest in education
  • job creation
  • demographic dividend
  • social policies
  • sustainable
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