Some people argue that globalisation has been a great benefit to people around the world, while others believe that it is the cause of many of the problems we see today. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

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globalisation

, there has been a debate going on in the modern world. Some

people

believe that

globalisation

has been a great benefit to

people

around the world. Others believe that it is the cause of many of the

problem

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problems

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we see today. I am in favour of

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statement.

First

of all,

globalisation

has so much effect on immigration.

People

are looking for places to survive under good

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conditions

contions

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conditions

for

theirselfs

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their selfs

themself

as well as their families.

Due to the

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increasing

life

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living

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expenses and unemployment are the main issue for immigrants. That movement among the countries cause lots of trouble for citizens

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whom has been already living

wealthy

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countries

contries

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countries

.

Increasing

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population of rich cities may

also

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effect

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the employment and cost of living.

Secondly

,

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rate may

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increase

increas

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increase

, just because of

globalisation

. Cities would be much more crowded and safety would be

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case for those places. Lack of police

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force

forces

forse

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force

or even not enough national health services are likely to owervelheme due to arising population.

On the other hand

, commuting is more than ever due to

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globalisation

.

people

have a chance to know different

culture

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cultures

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and different languages just because of commuting. As long as we understand each other better, our communication would become

more

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stronger. Trade and

bussiness

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business

in between nations will increase rapidly

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if we have enough and good understanding

each

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other. In conclusion, I believe that the main purpose of

globalisation

is to find the better for

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ourselves

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and our nation. We should

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consider

concider

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consider

globalisation

neither

individual

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individuals

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nor governments. During

this

big wave of

globalisation

, if we find

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balance on living coast, safety,

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health

healt

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health

services and living coast as

people

of

earth

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,

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altogether

all together

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altogether

, all of the results of

globalisation

would turn

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a great benefit for all of us. Yet, it is obvious that we haven't found the optimum way of

globalisation

. employment is

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one of the crucial

issue

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issues

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for immigrants.