What's your favorite way to have dinner with yours friends: going out for dinner, inviting them to your home, sharing everybody's food, bringing your own food, cooking together /separately or any other option?

With
friends
everything feels happy and good and getting an opportunity of having
a
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dinner
with them will make the get-together more amusing. Among all the choices
as
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mentioned above, I prefer the option of bringing our own’s
food
while going out for the
dinner
with
friends
. I feel
this
way for two reasons, variety in
food
and
time
saving, which I will explore in
this
essay. At an initial point, I would like to say that, when it comes to
food
everyone
want
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that it should be tasty, yummy and off-course filled with different types of spices. The taste and choice of
food
differs
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from
person
to
person
and if I get a choice to make
food
,
then
I will make it spicy, intriguing and delicious. For
an
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example, some of my
friends
like
italian
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food
, while some continental and so on. In
this
way, we all
friends
gets
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diversity
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in
food
during the get-together. In my
friends
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group, my two-three
friends
can
cook
the same dish in distinct
style
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also
, which makes the flavour of
food
more diverse. Notwithstanding,
with
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the above points, bringing our own
food
is
also
saving
time
. In
this
situation
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one
person
have
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to
cook
only one meal amount of
food
and not
to
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cook
for too many people.
moreover
,
this
also
save
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time
while preparing
food
, as less amount
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food
need
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to be cooked. For
an
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example,
few
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months back I was having a gathering with my college
friends
after a long
time
. One evening we all meet
on
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the
dinner
on Wednesday. since we all are working, so everyone hardly gets
time
to
cook
food
therefore
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, we all decide to bring our own cooked meal for
single
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person
from home. So, in a nutshell, I believe that whenever I get a chance to meet my
friends
at
dinner
I will prefer to bring our own
food
for the flock, because of the variety of
food
and less
time
-consuming.
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