What's your favorite way to have dinner with yours friends: going out for dinner, inviting them to your home, sharing everybody's food, bringing your own food, cooking together /separately or any other option?

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friends

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everything feels happy and good and getting an opportunity of having

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dinner

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with them will make the get-together more amusing. Among all the choices

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mentioned above, I prefer the option of bringing our own’s

food

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while going out for the

dinner

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with

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. I feel

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way for two reasons, variety in

food

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and

time

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saving, which I will explore in

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essay. At an initial point, I would like to say that, when it comes to

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everyone

want

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that it should be tasty, yummy and off-course filled with different types of spices. The taste and choice of

food

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differs

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from

person

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person

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and if I get a choice to make

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then

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I will make it spicy, intriguing and delicious. For

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example, some of my

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italian

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, while some continental and so on. In

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way, we all

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gets

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diversity

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food

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during the get-together. In my

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friends

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group, my two-three

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can

cook

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the same dish in distinct

style

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, which makes the flavour of

food

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more diverse. Notwithstanding,

with

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the above points, bringing our own

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also

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saving

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situation

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one

person

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have

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cook

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only one meal amount of

food

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and not

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cook

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for too many people.

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this

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save

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time

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while preparing

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, as less amount

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food

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need

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to be cooked. For

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example,

few

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months back I was having a gathering with my college

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after a long

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. One evening we all meet

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the

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on Wednesday. since we all are working, so everyone hardly gets

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cook

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therefore

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, we all decide to bring our own cooked meal for

single

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person

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from home. So, in a nutshell, I believe that whenever I get a chance to meet my

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dinner

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I will prefer to bring our own

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for the flock, because of the variety of

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and less

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-consuming.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
6
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

326 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?