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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, the development of
internet
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 made online shopping become more popular. People now can shopping without
go
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 out to the
shop
 and the only thing that they need is a
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smartphone
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smart phone
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smartphone
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. Buying things
by
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this
 way still have demerits, but the
positives
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 sides appear to overtake the negative side. The drawbacks of shopping online may exist. One of the problems is the reliability of goods can not be determined exactly. Because the
third
 party can not control the quality of
shop
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 and
customer
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customers
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also
 do not go to
shop
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the shop
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 to check. So, until
customer
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customers
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take
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 the
order
, they know the quality of
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the good
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good
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goods
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.
Second
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 trouble is people who buy things online must wait to take their
order
. Because of the delivery
time
, if the taken place is too far,
customer
 must wait a long
time
 to take
order
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the order
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.
Nevertheless
, these issues can be generally resolved. Nowadays
third
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party
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parties
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 still can not control and qualify
quality
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the quality
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 of goods of all shopping online but they have more
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solutions
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 to protect the right of
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the customer
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customer
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customers
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.
For example
, if
customer
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customers
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order
bad
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a bad
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 product, they can send it back to
supplier
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the supplier
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 without extended cost.
Beside
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 that,
customer
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customers
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 can stay
ay
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at
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 home and just need one click to buy
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anything
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any thing
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anything
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 on the internet.
That is
 very
convenience
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 for people who do not have
time
 to go
to
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shop
. The
time
 of delivering is not trivial with the
time
 you go to the
shop
.
For example
,
customer
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customers
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 buy online and they know
the
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exactly the
time
 when
order
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an order
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 will be delivered. They can arrange their
time
 easily when they
shopping
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 online. In conclusion,
although
 online shopping is not reliable,
it’s
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its
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 convenience still
give
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 more than expected. In my view, the potential benefits more than
make up
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 for any disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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