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Some people think that computer and inter are important in children study but other think that students can learn more effectively in school with teachers. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

#people #computer #children #study #students #school #teachers
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Modern
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the Modern
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 era, modern technology
such
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internet
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the internet
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 and computer are important for
students
 for their
study
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studies
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, but
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others
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other
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others
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 think
students
 can learn more effectively in
school
 with
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a tutor
the tutor
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tutor
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tutors
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. According to
me
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,me
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 the
second
 notion is more appropriate than
first
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the first
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.
This
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have
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 both side merits. Let us examine the arguments in
upcoming
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an upcoming
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 paragraph with relevant
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reasons to
reasons
reasonsto
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reasons to
 reach
concert
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 conclusion. Undoubtedly,it is true that modern gadgets like
that
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the
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 internet and computer are mandatory got
students
. The digital era plays a great
roll
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role
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 in
students
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students'
student's
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 life.
Students
 can attend their
class
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classes
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 from their
home
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homes
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 as well as
they
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apply
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save
their
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time. To provide proper education day by day developed new technology. During covid19 which
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is a
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a
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an
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 epidemic on the whole world ,
students
 attend their classes from their
home
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homes
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.
Consequently
,
childerns
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children
 were not allowed to go to
school
. Modern gadgets
their
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apply
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are
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abled
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able
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 to continue their study from home. Eventually, a great innovation is taken by wireless devices,thereby,
students
 can solve their problems very soon. Nowadays, many apps are launched for online study which
are
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is
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 helpful.
On the other hand
,
school
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a school
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 is a place, where
children 's
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children
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 get theoretical as well as practical knowledge.
Adolscence
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Adolescence
Adolescents
learn
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learns
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 more effectively with their peers and tutors. In
school
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,school
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 they learn about their academic as well as
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cultural
culturel
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cultural
,traditional,ethical and moral values. Their physical activities are done by them. Sometimes, they do their assignment with discussion in a group which is more helpful. To conclude, both the views
modern
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of modern
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 technology and
school
 with mentors
is
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are
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 essential. As far as I am concerned with
second
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 notion.
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