Some people say that music os a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

It is believed that

music

is an essential tool that unites

people

from different walks of life.

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essay agrees that

music

is a unifying force in building social networks and a platform for learning others' traditions.

To begin

,

music

has played a vital role in

people

building and increasing their social capacity.

For example

, when a

music

concert is organised, both young and elderly adults are in attendance perhaps, mingle with one another from other countries and cultural backgrounds,

also

, may as well , exchange contacts, values and business ideas and

subsequently

expand friendship zones. Attending a

music

exhibition graced by talented musicians and artists provides a good ground in strengthening relationships that have

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in existence or forming a new one as the case may be, it breaks malicious boundaries that have existed between ethnic groups.

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means

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long standing

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enemity

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enmity

can be resolved because

of

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people

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one

another

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music

and songs and invariably

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themselves.

In addition

,

music

is a learning platform

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people

's way of life and traditional practices.

Music

could be a medium for individuals to become aware of diverse

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religions

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, norms and

culture

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cultures

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of other regions .

For instance

, some

music

videos display local attires, food and languages which are

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filmed

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filled

and watched through Internet, in cinemas or film houses.There are a lot of songs, artists sang in their native dialect, wearing traditional outfits, which are ways of identification and portraiting a national heritage.

Finally

,

music

is food for the soul. Human beings

mediate

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on a type of song they listen to and try to reflect on the meaning and undertone of a particular lyric. It may be a process of healing the soul and mind in persons that are emotionally wounded. Humans can derive joy ,happiness and pleasure from it and probably helps to

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mental and physical stress. In conclusion , I support the view that

music

fosters interethnic relationships,

proffers

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and proffers

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information and

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medicine for the soul.