The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

People
have always had the desire to
copy
their
behavior
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, their appearance, and
also
their lifestyle from others. Due to the rapid pace of globalization and the huge amount of information flowing on the Internet,
society
has more access to new trends in various areas
such
as dressing styles and new
products
in each section. Regardless of being the producer or the consumer,
people
tend to
copy
others’
products
or styles. I believe that it is due to the nature of human beings and to a certain
point
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it is necessary in
society
although
in some cases it might not be acceptable in communities. In the following
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further
consideration will be provided around the mentioned subject.
Firstly
, by the review of the fashion style in recent
decades
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we comprehend that
copy
is a vital element of
this
industry. In
fact
, the more
people
copy
others’ dressing
style
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styles
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, the more a particular set of
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dress
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gets prevalent over a period of time.
This
, actually leads clothes companies to sell more.
For instance
, every year, clothing companies create a new winter style for their
products
based on the
fact
that
people
usually
copy
new styles.
Therefore
they can gain a high amount of profit from the winter sale.
Secondly
, It is widely (believed) that the
products
which are used by the majority of
a
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society
have better quality.
In other words
,
people
usually
copy
others’ decisions in choosing
products
because they think they wouldn’t be selected by others if they didn’t have standard qualifications. The point is that
,
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this
fact
might not be always true. As an example, a product might have a high rate of sale despite the
fact
that it doesn’t have a high quality. In
fact
, a particular good might be high
demanded
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just because of strong advertisements that lead
people
to
copy
others and buy a specific product. In conclusion, the tendency to
copy
has been prevalent among members of a
society
since the early days of
the
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human creation.
Although
it is a necessary attribute in every
society
, it might have negative effects that lead
people
to make
a
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wrong decision in choosing needed
products
.
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