The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it?

It is true that
English
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language
is the most important sector of the development of
tourism
around the
world
. Some
people
believe that
English
is widely spoken nowadays.
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in economic trades and understanding other
people
's feelings easily are the biggest advantages of
this
, but disappearing other
cultures
and becoming great loss of
tourism
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the tourism
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sector are the primary disadvantages. On the one hand,
English
is considered to be the only international
language
in the
world
. If it is spoken
by
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globally
then
there would be some benefits.
Firstly
,
people
can understand their feelings
each
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for each
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other by speaking one
language
only.
Secondly
,
people
can easily work with other
countries
in economic
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factors
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: trading, selling,
buying
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and buying
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things by using
this
only
language
.
For example
, if
people
may use only a
language
all over the
world
, there cannot be
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in economic and communication
each
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with each
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other.
Instead
of hiring a translator,
people
can communicate smoothly without wasting time.
Therefore
, it will help not only
countries
but
also
people
throughout the
world
which would promote learning,
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flow of information and ideas.
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Moreover
,
trade
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the trade
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will be increased in
world
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the world
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economy.
On the other hand
, there are several
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disadvantages
advantages
diadvantages
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disadvantages
for
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having only one
language
.
First
of all, using
English
as
a
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main
language
means the disappearance of all other
languages
gradually and matters like
cultures
, their mother
languages
that
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are
vanishly
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vanishingly
vanishing
vanished
slowly.
Additionally
, it would be a great loss of
tourism
because
people
do not want to travel for pleasure band interest if all the
countries
has
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the same
languages
and similar
cultures
. As an example, if
people
around the
world
use only
language
, there will not be having traditional
cultures
, costumes and mother
tongue
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tongues
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and
then
tourism
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tourist
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attractions will not remain
during
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for
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next
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the next
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decades. As a country that does not have a place
where
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that
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is interesting for tourists, it can not get
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a budget
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from
tourism
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the tourism
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sector. In
this
case, many
countries
would devastate economically those who based on
tourism
as a source of income. In conclusion, becoming
English
as
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apply
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a global
language
can be beneficial if
people
share their feelings and improve socialization in businesses.
However
,
people
cannot ignore the local
languages
and
cultures
. These should be ensured as a rich heritage for future generations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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