2. You have moved to a new place. Write a letter to a friend giving reason why you moved to that place. Describe that place. Invite your friend to visit you.

Dear Suniti, Hope you are enjoying your new phase of life with your little baby and I can't express how eagerly I am waiting to meet you both. Since you are planning to visit me
next
week, I wanted to let you know that I have shifted to Noida in my newly built house which is Sector 46. I must tell you our house is situated at the most happening place in Noida.
Firstly
, it is just 2Km away from my office and now I can finely sleep for more hours.
Secondly
, all the shopping malls and party places are nearby so we need not think too much while travelling during peak hours.
Lastly
,
next
to society, we a have happening market with various food joints to enjoy scrumptious food. So, my dear friend, I am eagerly waiting to meet you guys and now you have to plan a visit at the earliest at my new address, which is A-104, Sector 46, Noida. Come soon to meet me Yours lovingly, Jasmeen
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