Some people believe that children should go to extra classes after school. Others, however, think that children should spend that time playing instead. Discuses both views and give your own opinion.
In the modern days, many
parents
believe that children
should go to additional classes
after school. On the other hand
, some parents
think that their children
need to spend that time
playing instead
. In my opinion, both sides have positive aspects as well as negative sides.
First
of all, children
have extra study time
has many positive aspects such
as, joining chess club and learning a different language. When children
learn to play chess it can impact kids'
ability to analytic skills and improve their critical thinking. When Change noun form
kids
children
got those skills and they can apply Correct pronoun usage
them on
on
the rest of life and even their future job. Change preposition
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Moreover
, kids
learning a new language can help them understand another culture and bring about many opportunities for their future careers. In fact, most scientists agree that children
's brains get knowledge easily and learn things very faster. I believe that kids
learn new things very faster than adults, parents
should be supporting their kids
with what their want to learn.
Secondly
, on the other hand
, there are a few negative sides. It is true that many kids
have extra activities or classes
after their main classes
. However
, parents
should consider their time
and interest in a subject. After class kids
, they might be tired and it can impact their study progress. Besides
, children
's interest in the subject is most important. For example
, if children
are not interested in heavy math or another subject that would be hard to teach to them and the results would not be what parents
expect. This
situation might lead to kids
' issues with mental health such
as stress or depression. Therefore
, parents
should consider kids
' interests and understanding children
's interests is most important as well as their length of study time
.
In conclusion, there are several negative and positive factors that can lead when children
have extra classes
after school and in my opinion, positive aspects mostly impact children
's future opportunities.Submitted by ulziiko81 on
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