Some people believe that children should go to extra classes after school. Others, however, think that children should spend that time playing instead. Discuses both views and give your own opinion.

In the modern days, many
parents
believe that
children
should go to additional
classes
after school.
On the other hand
, some
parents
think that their
children
need to spend that
time
playing
instead
. In my opinion, both sides have positive aspects as well as negative sides.
First
of all,
children
have extra study
time
has many positive aspects
such
as, joining chess club and learning a different language. When
children
learn to play chess it can impact
kids'
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ability to analytic skills and improve their critical thinking. When
children
got those skills and they can apply
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the rest of life and even their future job.
Moreover
,
kids
learning a new language can help them understand another culture and bring about many opportunities for their future careers. In fact, most scientists agree that
children
's brains get knowledge easily and learn things very faster. I believe that
kids
learn new things very faster than adults,
parents
should be supporting their
kids
with what their want to learn.
Secondly
,
on the other hand
, there are a few negative sides. It is true that many
kids
have extra activities or
classes
after their main
classes
.
However
,
parents
should consider their
time
and interest in a subject. After class
kids
, they might be tired and it can impact their study progress.
Besides
,
children
's interest in the subject is most important.
For example
, if
children
are not interested in heavy math or another subject that would be hard to teach to them and the results would not be what
parents
expect.
This
situation might lead to
kids
' issues with mental health
such
as stress or depression.
Therefore
,
parents
should consider
kids
' interests and understanding
children
's interests is most important as well as their length of study
time
. In conclusion, there are several negative and positive factors that can lead when
children
have extra
classes
after school and in my opinion, positive aspects mostly impact
children
's future opportunities.
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