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Some people believe that children should go to extra classes after school. Others, however, think that children should spend that time playing instead. Discuses both views and give your own opinion.

#people #children #classes #school #time #discuses
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In the modern days, many
parents
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 believe that
children
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 should go to additional
classes
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 after school.
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, some
parents
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 think that their
children
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 need to spend that
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 playing
instead
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. In my opinion, both sides have positive aspects as well as negative sides.
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 of all,
children
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 have extra study
time
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 has many positive aspects
such
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 as, joining chess club and learning a different language. When
children
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 learn to play chess it can impact
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kids'
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kids
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 ability to analytic skills and improve their critical thinking. When
children
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 got those skills and they can apply
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them on
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on
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to
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 the rest of life and even their future job.
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,
kids
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 learning a new language can help them understand another culture and bring about many opportunities for their future careers. In fact, most scientists agree that
children
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's brains get knowledge easily and learn things very faster. I believe that
kids
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 learn new things very faster than adults,
parents
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 should be supporting their
kids
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 with what their want to learn.
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,
on the other hand
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, there are a few negative sides. It is true that many
kids
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 have extra activities or
classes
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 after their main
classes
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.
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,
parents
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 should consider their
time
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 and interest in a subject. After class
kids
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, they might be tired and it can impact their study progress.
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,
children
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's interest in the subject is most important.
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, if
children
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 are not interested in heavy math or another subject that would be hard to teach to them and the results would not be what
parents
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 expect.
This
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 situation might lead to
kids
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' issues with mental health
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 as stress or depression.
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,
parents
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 should consider
kids
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' interests and understanding
children
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's interests is most important as well as their length of study
time
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. In conclusion, there are several negative and positive factors that can lead when
children
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 have extra
classes
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 after school and in my opinion, positive aspects mostly impact
children
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's future opportunities.
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