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Some people think that goverment is wasting money on arts and thag money could better spent else where to what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #goverment #money #arts #thag
The way how the
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Governments
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money
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 been an issue for most of the debates. Some people believe that
the
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money
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wasting
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 on
arts
 is not
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necessary
neccessary
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necessary
. Others believe that other than
arts
,
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that
the
though
money
 could better
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else where
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elsewhere
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. I disagree with the
second
 statement.
Art
 is always there since the
first
 human has
exist
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. It has started with a tiny scratch on the cave wall and continues with visual
art
 on the computer's screen. It is obvious that without
art
, we can not
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develop
developed
develope
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develop
 well enough in any
fields
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.
Art
 improves our
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imagination
immagination
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imagination
 so we become more creative. Creativity is the golden key
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 improvement in any field.
Art
also
 provides us
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better perspective and understanding. If we see
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things from
different
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perspective
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perspectives
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, there will be
diversity
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 of different opinions.
This
 diversity will likely
to
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end up with positive results which can be beneficial for all of us.
improvment
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improvement
 in science will be the
outcomes
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outcome
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 of those imagination and creativity and understanding of different
perspective
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perspectives
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. As an example, treatments in medicine or transportation technology will be improved by these outcomes. We may see faster
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 or artificial organs in the future.
However
, there must be other
services
such
 as
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health
healt
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health
services
,
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security
secirity
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security
services
 and education which are run by
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governments
government
goverments
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governments
. These
services
 are the basic fundamental of life. In
this
 case,
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governments
government
goverments
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governments
 should spend
money
 to provide and
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increase
increas
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increase
 these
sort
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 of
services
 without any hesitation. In conclusion, as long as
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governments
government
goverments
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governments
 find the right balance between
arts
 and
basic
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 needs of
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citizens
citicens
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citizens
whereas
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 spending
money
 on them, everything will be
soted
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sorted
 out well enough for everyone. I believe that
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governments
government
goverments
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governments
never take
step
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 back on spending
money
 on
arts
. It is just because, development in
art
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 would provide us
beter
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better
 future for ourselves as well as
next
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the next
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 generations.
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