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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #society
Nowadays many people believe that early marriage is the root cause of many divorces. I totally disagree due to multiple reasons stated below.
To begin
 with, people who get married at an early stage have more chances of delivering healthy babies. At an early
age
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one
 will not have risked chances of getting HIV positive by dating many people.
For example
, I got married at an early stage
gave
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 birth before the
age
 of 30, l am enjoying my good health and happily married.
Moreover
, young couples have much
time
 for themselves before the arrival of babies. To exemplify, going out on holidays will
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enjoyable
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 without any worries
of
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 what the community will say.
In addition
, it is easy to adjust and compromise at young
age
hence
 the couple will learn new things together.
Therefore
 if
one
 is failing to adjust , there will be plenty of
time
 to divorce and remarry.
Furthermore
, it encourages
one
 to be more responsible and mature enough to handle the
families
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 needs.
For instance
, if it is a man working he will not spend his money partying,
instead
 he will save the money for family
developments
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.
This
 was
also
 discovered and published in 2012 by the Journal of Health and Social Behavior. To conclude, marrying before the
age
 of thirty gives
one
 ample
time
 to plan when to have kids. Your children will be independent by the
time
one
 retires and will not have school fees pressure. Not only that, you will be energetic and be able to play with your children.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fertility
  • Maternal health
  • Psychological stability
  • Social maturity
  • Economic benefits
  • Shared responsibilities
  • Ancestral customs
  • Cultural imperatives
  • Personal development
  • Career establishment
  • Societal norms
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Divorce rates
  • Life decisions
  • Subjective wellbeing
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