Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some may argue that unpaid

work

for teenagers should be mandatory. I personally concur that working

teens

may have positive impacts on society and

teens

themselves, I do not agree with those who think it has to be an obligation. Teenagers can benefit from a number of advantages while working in their spare time. To start with, having a job has a great role in developing a sense of responsibility.

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make a circumstance where

one

can see the consequences of their actions more frequently and vividly.

In addition

to that, having an occupation since adolescence is a significant way to improve self-esteem and self-confidence.

Moreover

, by being able to

work

as a teen,

one

can make a stronger resume which will come

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in their future effort for hunting jobs.

On the other hand

, working adolescents are

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the community.

One

of the most prominent uses is as

work

labour. Employers who offer low-paid jobs and part-time positions which do not interest ordinary adults

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can benefit from

this

cheaper workforce.

For example

, jobs like cashier and delivering packages which naturally do not have high wages and great scope of prosperity, usually are done by part-timers who are mostly teenagers. Having said that, obligatory

work

for anyone including

teens

is not just. The right to choose to have a job or not is a fundamental human right and no

one

should waver that. More importantly, nowadays child labour is a prominent issue in some nations. So governments have to put some effort to tackle it not

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make it a common act. To sum up, working

teens

are advantageous for both themselves and society, should they do it willingly and not by force. I believe people under eighteen are still counted as children, so making them

work

involuntarily is a form of child labour which should be banned not encouraged.