Without capital punishment, our lives are less secure and crimes increase continuously. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued by some that if there is no death penalty our existence

are

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unprotected and immorality will rise exponentially. In my opinion, I agree that

death

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warrant helps to reduce violent acts and protect our

lives

.

Firstly

,

execution

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of hardened criminals is the way to guard the

lives

of citizens.

This

is because if villains are sentenced to

longer

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years in

prisons

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prison

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or life

imprisonments

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this

does not guarantee they will be kept in detention forever.

Moreover

, there have been several

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occasions

occassions

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occasions

when a notorious culprit escaped from jail and return back to

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hurting and robbing the population of their personal belongings.

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, in Nigeria, several years back, a hardened armed robber who

has

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claimed a lot of

civilian's

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lives

and properties was served with life in jail,

his

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crew made a ploy to take him out of the jail.

Till

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this

present

day

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he is still

be

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searched for.

However

, he is still a threat to the populace and most people are living in fear.

Thus

, had it been he was killed immediately, the

lives

of citizens could have been protected.

Secondly

, judicial murder is

a

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greatest deterrent to criminals and potential criminals. In

other word

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, if people know that the

consequences

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of committing

certain

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a certain

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heinous

crime

is

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killing, they will desist from

such

crime

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crimes

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.

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, in Saudi Arabia, the punishment for many heinous crimes

such

as

as

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drug smuggling, rappist,

burglary

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and burglary

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is execution.

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, there

seem

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to

a

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reduction in the occurrence of immorality in their society. In conclusion, legalized killing for heinous

crime

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crimes

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is a must for any community that values

it's

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population safety and decrease

in

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apply

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crime

rates.