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In some countries more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for this? How can people reach this question?

#countries #people #history #house
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In many nations, where the people who buy houses, are eager to know more about the past
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 again and again,
these fact
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 can be found
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newspaper
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, articles , old books, websites and native neighbours.
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people
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 believe that the same thing is repeating again in
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 myth can affect to future as porn and corn.
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, most of them get used to discovering the past of the premisses when they buy.
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, when purchasing property near the river , gather information from the irrigation department and reservation report from the land registry of the deed. Analysing these reports help to prevent possible disasters
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 as soil erosion , landslides and floods.
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, it will use a precaution. When extending the building collects ten years street line report and plans checked by the lawyer and the divisional secretariat officer, having legal property is much more beneficial to the owner rather illegal property.
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, the lawyer and land registry help the buyer to check the past of the building.
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, official past records can be found in old newspapers, libraries, articles, land registry reports and irrigation department websites.
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, informal
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 can be found in native neighbours, great grandparents. They are very keen and enthusiastic about telling
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.
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, respective ancestors and religious leaders were written the
history
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 on stone plaques and special kinds of books called “puskolapoth” found in India and Sri Lanka. These
facts
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 help to get a clear picture of the past. To conclude, reading and analysing past events can be much useful in critical situations and environmental issues. Yet, these
history
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 records can be found in manual
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 as well as digital
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 as websites
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