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Changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

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 Line chart depicts how much
time
 people spent
time
 doing housework using different electrical appliances during 99
years
 from 1920 to 2019. It is clear from the graph that the rate of using
refrigerator
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 and vacuum
cleaner
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 had increased during the period. Using of washing machine in 1920
approximatly
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approximately
 40% of households.
Then
 in
year
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 1960
rate
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the rate
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 increased dramatically to reach 70%, with a sudden drop in
year
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 1980 to reach only 60%,
then
 continue to rise again in the following
years
.
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with
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year
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 1920 the use of the refrigerator was almost 0%, but in the following
years
 start to
increased
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 to reach its peak in
year
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 1980 of 100%
then
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 to be a steady line
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until
untill
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until
 2019. The use of vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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 started in
year
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 1920 with
acceptable
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 percentage of 30%
also
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and also
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to increase
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increased
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 during the following
years
 to reach 100% started from
year
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 2000 to 2019.
As a result
 of using
this different appliances
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this different appliance
these different appliances
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 the
time
 spent per
week
for
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doing different house tasks decreased in 1920
started
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with
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at
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 50 hours per
week
 to
reach
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 only 10 hours per
week
 in 2019. To sum up. we could say the invention of the different home appliances helped the
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humanity
hummanity
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humanity
 to reduce the load and
time
 spent every
week
to do
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doing
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 the
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housework
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house work
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housework
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • increase
  • decrease
  • limited access
  • introduction
  • tasks
  • efficient
  • rely
  • technological advancements
  • socioeconomic factors
  • availability
  • resulted in
  • leisure time
  • correlation
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