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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were bron. What might be reason for this.What are the advantages and disadvantages.

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As a consequence of
globalization
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,globalization
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 people are motivated to reside in various places in the world. At the
sametime
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same time
significant
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 number of community occupy in their
hometown
 engaging various activities in some premises.
This
 essay discusses both pros and cons of living in their native place.
Firstly
, while living in
hometown
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their hometown
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 an individual
gain
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 various benefits over known persons. Anyone has
the
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 plethora of friends in
own
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their own
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 native place and
being
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is
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 able to receive their assistance whenever in
troublesome
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a troublesome
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situation
situations
situatio
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situation
. In my own experience , our neighbours gave their fullest support by giving
subsides
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 and all medical aids, once I became corona infected. ,
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 when someone is used to a particular environment ,
such
 as in
hometown
, feel more comfortable in every aspect of life.
For instance
, people residing in the tropical zone, find it more difficult to live
in
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either close to the north pole or south pole. Living in the same nature , an individual feels more convenient and is able to reside more efficiently. On contrarily living in native place, urge a person to think in a narrow-minded way and lead convention d life without individual progress. For ,instance when I was in my own village, I don’t get many job opportunities. After going to the urban areas, I received diversified jobs with different categories of remuneration .
Moreover
,it discourages expanding of technologies and new knowledge if all lives in their
hometown
 ,in Sri Lanka, It has become mandatory for government teachers to render their services in rural schools for at least five years as nobody likes to occupy
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superb area. In my point of view depending on the situation involves, one should decide where to live, irrespective of whether it is his
hometown
 or not.
Submitted by Yasangima Suhashinee Bandara on

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