In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future. To what extent do you agree with this view?

The

last

two decades have seen drastic changes in the way

people

’s lives are influenced by IT, with many significant milestones in

this

field.

However

, while these technological breakthroughs have brought many benefits to society, it can be strongly argued that these tremendous advances in IT will lead to more negative impacts than

positive

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.

To begin

with, email has made communication, especially abroad, much faster, and simpler, resulting in a wide range of benefits for business and commerce.

Furthermore

, the World Wide Web helps

people

to get information easily on every conceivable subject.

For example

,

people

can access the latest news, online education courses, medical advice, and much more via the internet. It is obvious that these technological changes have made life more convenient and easier for a vast majority of

people

and will continue to do so for decades to come.

Nevertheless

, the influences of

this

new technological development have not all been of benefit.

For instance

, many

people

feel that the widespread use of email is destroying traditional forms of communication

such

as letter handwriting, telephone, and face-to-face conversation.

This

could cause a considerable decline in

people

’s basic ability to socialize and interact with each other on a day-to-day basis.

In addition

, a plethora of websites has meant that it is almost impossible to regulate and control.

This

has led to many concerns regarding children getting access to unsuitable websites and viruses. Unluckily,

this

kind of problem might even get worse in the future at least until more regulated systems are set up. In conclusion, recent advances in IT have brought many benefits, yet I believe developments involving

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new technology are likely to cause many problems in the future. These must be addressed to avoid damaging impacts

to

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individuals and society.