Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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the same way. As a negative impact, it is not lead to creativity because they do not think about different paths.
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of humans think that it is more suitable to
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who have various thoughts. Some benefits and drawbacks are
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different experiences when dealing with companions. The major disadvantage on
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sometimes and as well as, different thoughts are better sometimes. It depends on occasionally. In my purview,
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working as a team because it will give us
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • harmonious
  • stress-free
  • disagreements
  • conflicts
  • reinforce
  • validate
  • comforting
  • reassuring
  • broaden your understanding
  • perspectives
  • challenge intellectually
  • think critically
  • personal growth
  • development
  • healthy debates
  • communication skills
  • mutual respect
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