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Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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these both views and
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 the same way. As a negative impact, it is not lead to creativity because they do not think about different paths.
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 of humans think that it is more suitable to
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 who have various thoughts. Some benefits and drawbacks are
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different experiences when dealing with companions. The major disadvantage on
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