Some people think that zoos are cruel, and all zoos should be closed. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
The issue of animal freedom has caused widespread concern among animal protection organizations and ordinary people. Some people suggest that all
zoos
in the world should be closed. In my view, from a moral perspective, zoos
do have their drawbacks while zoos
play a vital role in research and protecting animals
.
Admittedly, some people believe that exhibiting animals
with the aim of making money is unethical. This
is because we have no right to use animals
for entertainment and profit. On top of that, zoo animals
are kept in artificial environments, and they have very limited living space. Some animals
leave their wild habitat and are locked in cages will cause serious mental diseases. For example
, Spanish biologists have found that chimpanzees can suffer from severe mental disorders when they are kept in cages for performances. Based on this
, it is justifiable to claim that some zoos
should be banned and animals
should be allowed to perform.
However
, zoos
play an important role in wildlife conservation and allow scientists to study animal behaviour. In terms of animal protection, zoos
keep many endangered species to breed and survival. For example
, due to climate change, pandas can hardly survive in the wild environment, but zoos
have special breeding programs for pandas, they can be protected and become national treasures of China. Furthermore
, zoos
provide an opportunity for scientists to study animals
and their behaviours. Through these scientific observations and research, human beings can better understand animals
and can better protect animals
, some of the findings could even have benefits for humans.
In conclusion, although
some zoos
use animals
for performances and even abused animals
need to be closed, I feel that some zoos
also
have value in protecting endangered animals
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