You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my concern about the couple of problems that I am currently facing in sharing a room with my fellow. My name is Arsalan Farooq and I have recently gotten admission to
this
engineering college. I shifted to Karachi to pursue my engineering degree
last
month and was facing problems in finding suitable accommodation to live because of my low budget.
Therefore
, I decided to hire a shared compartment in the college in order to save on my living and travelling expense. I have never shared my space with anyone before due to which I have to face many issues.
Firstly
, I usually wake up early in the morning and go to bed early at night but my partner has a totally flipped schedule as he is used to waking up late in the night and listening to music late at the night.
As a result
, there is a lot of noise in the room due to which I am not able to sleep well.
Moreover
, the guy with me is habitual of smoking whereas I have a lung disease so, I always feel suffocation in the compartment and don't feel better throughout the day. You are requested to move me into another room where I can live alone so, I can follow my routine and focus on my studies as well as on my health. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours' Faithfully,
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