Some people think that the teenagers years are the happiest times pf most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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who believe that living in the teenage period is the most joyful

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of every

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who have faith that

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a lot of work in adulthood period,

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is the happiest

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essay will argue that the teenage years are the best

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in each

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life

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. On the one hand, these days a lot of

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think that living as a teenager is the best thing that can happen to someone. The vast majority of teenagers do not have any

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about daily

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and the only issue in their

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is how to plan for their plays where they can have an unforgivable

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. In my point of view teenagers not only do not have

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as monetary

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or how to feed their family but

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their families provide them with everything in terms of financially and mentally.

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, a survey which was conducted in my area in 2015 showed that only 3% per cent of the young generation knew the meaning of anxiety and depression.

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, some

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have

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concept that living as a mature

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in society could be the dream

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. Since some individuals are passionate about taking some responsibilities in their daily lives and can be known as a grown man or woman,

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feeling will give them to be important. So, by having

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feeling about

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and work,

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think being an adult is the best period of their

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, when you have different tasks in your

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, you are put under heavy pressure

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financial

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, these huge

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would create a situation where individuals could be treated

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mental illness.

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, more than 45% of employees who are working in my company have anxiety because of heavy duties and a lot of pressure. In conclusion, in some

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's minds, there is a concept that when you are living as a teenager you will have a happy

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others think in the opposite way where they think adult

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would be a much happier

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. But, children do not have any

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in their

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, so, they will be much happier and more passionate about

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Ensure a balanced discussion of both views before presenting your conclusion to strengthen your argument.

Coherence & Cohesion

Consider varying your sentence structure and vocabulary to enhance readability and interest.

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Introduction & Conclusion

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Supporting Examples

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Your opinion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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