Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree and say this is no longer true. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Being able to attend a
university
institution is claimed as the best means to be a wealthy person. However
, many contend that this
argument is no longer verified. Even though this
might be partially true, the graduates of the university
remain to be centres of attention in society.
If we examine the perspective of reputable and top-tier companies in the world, they are more likely to pick candidates from well-known universities. Moreover
, the corporates would actively engage with the academic systems to filter the best students from each college. For example
, McKinsey and Boston Consulting Group (BGC), two of the most prestigious consulting firms globally, collaborate with the big-3 Indonesian universities to select their best interns. Also
, they consider hiring people
from high-ranked business majors from oversea universities. This
shows that a university
title still holds a premium position to attain a certain peak in life.
However
, if we follow some inspirational people
who change the world, we easily find the fact that some of them did not finish their studies. For example
, Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg, ditched Harvard University
to focus on their ongoing research and business in technology and digital. Even though this
is a true story, many people
do not recall their privileges so they could be one of the billionaires in the world. In other words
, they could have not obtained their dreams without financial support from their core families.
In conclusion, we still have a chance to be successful without a degree yet this
opportunity will be smaller. Many corporates require some university
bachelors to fill their vacancies especially those from multinational companies. A man without a university
certification will be slightly hard to compete with other people
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