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The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest in youngsters. How true do you think it is? What is the best way to invest on?

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In the modern world, a
nation
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 can build its career with help of the youth. I believe in
this
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 statement. The
nation
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 can help young
people
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 to familiar with modern technology as well as
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country
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a country
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 should present higher study free of cost and create awareness among young
people
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 about
education
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 and modern
technologies
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. I shall discuss these viewpoints in the following paragraphs. Nowadays, many countries had participate in the race of technology.
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 of all, the young generation can contribute themselves in several ways to aid
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nation
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 for their bright future.
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 to that young
people
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 have enough understanding to learn about new
technologies
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 which help them in the future.
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, older
people
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 cannot suitable to learn new things, as well as their mind,minds cannot co-relate with them to use those
technologies
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.
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, young
people
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 are responsible to build their
nation
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 in a faithful way.
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, the
nation
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 can allocate free
education
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 for citizens who lived in the
country
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. Young
people
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 can pursue their higher studies without any restrictions related to funding.
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,
education
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 can help them in various ways like understanding
technologies
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. They can develop new things by doing research.
Such
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 as. Germany is the most advanced
country
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 in technology. In
this
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country
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, all study is available is free of cost for all
people
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. So, they can utilize their skills to develop their
nation
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 as well as themselves. To conclude, the young generation can choose the
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nation
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 future. If young
people
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 can spend their time in
education
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 to learn researching various
technologies
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.
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,
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nation
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a nation
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 can build the most advanced and sustainable
country
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.
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