A friend had a new born baby, you have picked up a present for the baby and want to visit to give it to him / her. Write a letter to : -Congratulate your friend -Tell him why you picked up the mentioned present. -Suggest arrangements for the visit.

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Dear Joly, I hope you're doing great, I'

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writing

this

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message in order to say congrats

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the new baby! I'

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really happy for you and can't wait to meet you and

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see your baby.

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is the first time that

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apply

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one of my friends

gave

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has given

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birth, so it's a new experience for me. I'

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very excited

for

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about

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the present that I just bought, because I

brought

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a pink dress as I promised you 5 years ago. The dress was out of stock for so long and I struggled a lot in order to get it,

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is what makes it a very

spacial

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special

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gift for me. I wanna tell you that I'

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planinng

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planning

planing

to visit you soon, but I'

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very busy

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week because of my work

hourse

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hours

horse

, so I decided to take a break for 6 days.

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, I will be free from

5th

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the 5th

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until the 11th of October. Please if you decide which day is suitable for you please let me know as soon as possible. See you soon, Nouf, Best wishes,

noufxmutSat Nov 02 2024

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Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure to check for consistency in verb tense to enhance clarity in your writing.

Task Achievement

Try to use the formal tone consistently as it aligns with the letter structure.

Coherence and Cohesion

The logical structure is maintained with all parts of the task addressed clearly.

Task Achievement

Expresses excitement and personal connection effectively, adding warmth to the letter.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

178 words

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A friend had a new born baby, you have picked up a present for the baby and want to visit to give it to him / her. Write a letter to : -Congratulate your friend -Tell him why you picked up the mentioned present. -Suggest arrangements for the visit.

Some people believe that after a child enters school their teachers will have more influence than their parents. To what extend do you agree or disagree

With the growing number of populations in cities. Many people are living in small homes that don't have outdoor spaces. Is this a negative or positive development?

In today's world many peoplel own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

Currently, an increasing number of people compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems do this cause? What are the possible solutions for this?

The Best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?