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A friend had a new born baby, you have picked up a present for the baby and want to visit to give it to him / her. Write a letter to : -Congratulate your friend -Tell him why you picked up the mentioned present. -Suggest arrangements for the visit.

#friend #baby #visit #-congratulate #-tell #-suggest #arrangements
Dear Joly, I hope you're doing great, I'
m
 writing
this
 message in order to say congrats
for
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 the new baby! I'
m
 really happy for you and can't wait to meet you and
to
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see your baby.
This
 is the first time that
I
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one of my friends
gave
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a
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birth, so it's a new experience for me. I'
m
 very excited
for
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 the present that I just bought, because I
brought
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 a pink dress as I promised you 5 years ago. The dress was out of stock for so long and I struggled a lot in order to get it,
this
 is what makes it a very
spacial
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 gift for me. I wanna tell you that I'
m
planinng
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planning
planing
 to visit you soon, but I'
m
 very busy
this
 week because of my work
hourse
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hours
horse
, so I decided to take a break for 6 days.
Therefore
, I will be free from
5th
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 until the 11th of October. Please if you decide which day is suitable for you please let me know as soon as possible. See you soon, Nouf, Best wishes,
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Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure to check for consistency in verb tense to enhance clarity in your writing.
Task Achievement
Try to use the formal tone consistently as it aligns with the letter structure.
Coherence and Cohesion
The logical structure is maintained with all parts of the task addressed clearly.
Task Achievement
Expresses excitement and personal connection effectively, adding warmth to the letter.

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