Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree or disagree? Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that universities need to have the same number of seats for both genders in all subjects. I strongly disagree with the idea of equality in every university subject as it limits the opportunity for well-deserved and talented people just because of their gender and creates unfair
competition
. People should not be restricted just because of being male or female. Individuals have different qualities and capabilities, therefore
talent and abilities differentiate us from others. For ,example in some ,countries male students
are not permitted to study gynaecology which is the study of illnesses affecting women although
there are numerous talented men who could be skilful doctors and pioneers in that field. Eventually, by doing so, the opportunity of studying
some particular subjects will be taken away from the ones who truly deserve a subject. Another concern is that gender equality limits Change preposition
to study
students
who genuinely have the potential for a subject and it leads to a competition
between the two genders that could have major repercussions. Although
competition
has benefits for people to develop their abilities, unfair competition
may have irreversible side effects. In a society where girls and boys are competing against each other to secure a place at university, stress and diseases which are triggered by stress are unavoidable. For
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example,
country
the number of male Add a comma
country,
students
who are selected to study in
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apply
more
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apply
than
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that
the
girls which Change preposition
of the
made
female Wrong verb form
makes
students
work twice harder
in order to win Rephrase
as hard
this
unfair competition
. Consequently
, this
decision has brought depression to many girls. In ,conclusion the selection of University students
should be based on merit and skills. Thus
it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on gender.Submitted by melikaarttkd on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite