In many developed countries, fast food is cheap and widely available. Many people tend to choose unhealthy options. Why do many people tend to choose unhealthy options? What can governments do to solve this problems?
In various developing nations, fast
food
is not expensive
and extremely obtainable product. Add an article
an expensive
the expensive
That is
the reason why do
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apply
people
make a choice for inappropriate food
options. The main problem is about cost
and the most valuable solution is to cut prices on healthy food
.
The principal problem associated with regular ordering unhealthy food
is the cost
, which is given for it. The issue is about an attractive advertisement of food
that shows up a low cost
of products
that actually taste appropriate. However
, the way how it cooked
by frying almost all of the Add a missing verb
is cooked
products
in
the menu and Change preposition
on
also
pour
in a big amount of oil leads to obesity and Wrong verb form
pouring
Correct quantifier usage
other
others
diseases. The result of Correct pronoun usage
other
this
for consumers are
decreasing Correct subject-verb agreement
is
number
of physical activities, depression, and bullying. Change the article
a number
the number
For example
, instead
of cooking or ordering appropriate healthy food
for lunch, I would rather get some fast food
because of its low price and taste.
To tackle this
problem the government should decrease the cost
of useful products
in every part of the city such
as,
markets, cafes, schools, offices and others. The Remove the comma
apply
month
salaries of many Replace the word
monthly
people
are not suitable for expensive products
and in order to change this
is to just cut prices. People
will get fascinated seeing the low costs. For example
, although
my friend had a
Correct article usage
apply
chose
to get a Macdonald's product from delivery, he had changed his mind after recognizing that another convenience café is almost twice cheaper.
In conclusion, ordering inappropriate Wrong verb form
chosen
food
is a major issue that can result
Add the preposition
inresult
fromresult
people
to obesity and mental problems, however
, it can be changed by the government if they will decrease the cost
of health
Replace the word
healthy
food
and make it suitable for consumers.Submitted by fkorchiyev on
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