The only way to improve the safety on our roads is to have stricter punishment for driving offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In various countries around the world, at least ten cases of accidents are recorded by the traffic department daily. Owning to the safety of motorists and the public in general, some believe that imposing stricter
punishments
is the only action to improve road safety. I totally agree for various reasons.
First
of all, motorists are more likely to pay better attention to the rules and regulations of the roads. With harder punishments
such
as huge fines or confiscation of the
personal vehicle, drivers have no other choice than to focus as the lack of it, could have severe consequences for them. In countries like the UAE, road cameras are put in various areas Change the word
their
such
as highways and junctions to caution mindless drivers who speed beyond road limits, change lanes without trafficators, or overtake. And those who are found on the wrong side of the law, are asked to pay huge fines or have their cars taken away from them. Since the UAE government put this
in
punishment in place, Change preposition
apply
less
accidents have been recorded by the traffic department thereby, rendering roads safer.
Change the quantifier
fewer
Secondly
, with stricter punishments
, offenders will think twice before they repeat the same mistake next
time. This
is because, "once beaten, twice shy". If something as valuable as money or the car itself, is taken from the motorists
, he/she wouldn't want to lose it again for silly reasons. Having Fix the agreement mistake
motorist
being
in a situation like Change the verb form
been
this
, I have realized 100 dollars, is not losing, again, for not using a trafficator therefore
, I always remember to adhere to the rule. And by doing so, I have been able to save my 100 dollars for some else which is important.
In conclusion, some believe that stricter punishments
for driving offenders is
the most practical way in making our roads safer. In my opinion, not only Change the verb form
are
is
stricter Correct subject-verb agreement
are
punishments
feasible but also
, highly necessary in this
day, age and time.Submitted by sadiqfadila99 on
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