The only way to improve the safety on our roads is to have stricter punishment for driving offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In various countries around the world, at least ten cases of accidents are recorded by the traffic department daily. Owning to the safety of motorists and the public in general, some believe that imposing stricter

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is the only action to improve road safety. I totally agree for various reasons.

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of all, motorists are more likely to pay better attention to the rules and regulations of the roads. With harder

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as huge fines or confiscation of

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personal vehicle, drivers have no other choice than to focus as the lack of it, could have severe consequences for them. In countries like the UAE, road cameras are put in various areas

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as highways and junctions to caution mindless drivers who speed beyond road limits, change lanes without trafficators, or overtake. And those who are found on the wrong side of the law, are asked to pay huge fines or have their cars taken away from them. Since the UAE government put

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punishment in place,

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accidents have been recorded by the traffic department thereby, rendering roads safer.

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, with stricter

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, offenders will think twice before they repeat the same mistake

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time.

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is because, "once beaten, twice shy". If something as valuable as money or the car itself, is taken from the

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, he/she wouldn't want to lose it again for silly reasons. Having

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in a situation like

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, I have realized 100 dollars, is not losing, again, for not using a trafficator

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, I always remember to adhere to the rule. And by doing so, I have been able to save my 100 dollars for some else which is important. In conclusion, some believe that stricter

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for driving offenders

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the most practical way in making our roads safer. In my opinion, not only

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stricter

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feasible but

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, highly necessary in

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day, age and time.