There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Artem and I am writing to you regarding the latest news related to the
park
located near the Sherbrook metro station. I have heard that
this
park
is going to be sold. Basically, it was stated that the
park
will not be closed, but I am concerned that it is just a matter of time. The bottom line is that
this
green zone is crucially important for our community.
First
, there are a lot of families around here and all of them prefer to have a walk there, but not somewhere else.
Second
, there are a few historical monuments and people should have access to them.
Third
, the
park
is extremely popular amongst sportsmen. Off top of my
head
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I can recall at least ten sports classes that take place in the
park
. My goal is to make you aware of how
this
place is valuable to us.
Also
, I would like to point out that we will fight for it. We will create posts on Facebook, give interviews to local TV channels and
then
we will have to go to the court if nothing helps. The community and I are open to dialogue, so if you are willing to contact us, you can do that at [email protected] Best regards, Artem.
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