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“As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time.” Do you agree or not?

#“as #computers #languages #waste #time
Now we are living in a technological era, as well as in the globalisation phenomena. So we have to communicate with enormous nations for education, business and many more issues.
Therefore
 every Nation is more or less dependent on others. All the things that will happen with conversational
language
 are the main equipment. Fortunately, we are getting all the
languages
 in Google Translate. Some people believe that computers translate most of the
language
 repeatedly and accurately. So people should not spend time learning foreign
languages
. It's a complete waste of time. In my opinion citizens of any country should not afford to learn any other
languages
. I will explain the given statement in the forthcoming paragraphs. In the beginning, we got foreign
languages
 instantly whenever and wherever I
themneeded
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them needed
. I don't have to keep any books or any other materials with me to find out the meaning of any other
language
-related things. Interestingly we do not need any help from teachers as guides to learn the
language
.
For instance
, we know the
language
 of China is much more difficult for everybody. It is a great difficult to communicate with them for any purpose but we can communicate with them very easily with Google Translate. The learning process is a matter of time-consuming. Learning from websites is very much convenient for everybody.
Moreover
, It is not necessary to spend any money for
this
 reason. But we need to Use money and time to learn
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a
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foreign
language
 which is given by the internet without any pay.
For example
, there are thousands of
language
 institutions built up throughout the earth where communities spend
a huge amounts
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a huge amount
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. In conclusion, both the statements have some positive or negative merits but between the two concepts, who should mark mass with the internet which will help us to learn any
language
 of the world.
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