In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?
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the
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cellphone
known as Correct article usage
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wallets
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among
amoung
people in many nations. Correct your spelling
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this
phenomenon, I believe that its pros outweigh its cons due to easy access and without fearing about
cash.
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tapping
double clicking
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cash-free
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cards-free
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also
make
a human paperless. To epitome, a survey conducted by researchers in America Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
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indicates
idicates
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online
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an online
wallet
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wallets
Thus
, mobiles are now become
more useful in every aspect of life.
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becoming
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payment
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smart watches
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smartwatches
also
easy to use just by tap as like as mobile. For instance
, In the newspaper name The Times of India, it was a headline related 70
% of mankind are using Correct word choice
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these digital wallet
and are Change the determiner
this digital wallet
these digital wallets
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Therefore
, this
way is the next
step in the growth of a country.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...