In many places, new homes are needed, but the only spaces available for building in in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new home there. What is your opinion about this?

Nowadays the increasing
population
has increased the demand
of
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residential housing, but there is a very limited supply of
land
is available in the urban
area
. To cope
the
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demand
of
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housing many people suggest
to
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use
the rural
area
to satisfy the
necesity
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necessity
of the
population
. In my opinión it
a
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good suggestion to
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extent I will discuss my
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view point
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in my upcoming paragraphs. The
use
of rural
land
for housing construction
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up to
upto
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up to
some extent is a good idea
,
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because as the limit of urban
area
land
is finished, If the rural
land
is not used for housing construction the price of urban housing will go sky high which will be
negative
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impact on the society. The rural
land
which
are
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not in
use
for cultivation can be used for housing
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development
develpment
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development
projects. Like
this
the traffic
congustion
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congestion
, pollution will reduce
price
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of real estate market will get maintained.
If
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like
this
scarecity
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scarcity
of
land
problema
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problem
problems
will be solved and rural people will
also
get to see the
lime light
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and
increasing
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in business turnover due to
increasing
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in
population
and
than
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the rural areal will get
develped
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developed
with hospitals , schools and Parks. With
this
uplifment
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upliftment
in society
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government
movement
govement
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government
revenues
also
increase with the income of residential tax , Income tax
this
funds will help to maintain the rural
area
and the burden of urban áreas will be shared. In conclusion , urban áreas which is already
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developed
develped
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developed
and due to lack of
land
availability the
population
will not going to stop growing,
like
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this
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government
govement
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government
has to play a vital role in merging the rural
area
to provide the
land
which cannot
use
for cultivation.
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