Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

Some individuals believe that

parents

are responsible for nurturing their

offsprings

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to become great members of our

community

while other advocates claim that

schools

are the best place to educate youngsters

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to mingle into the social fabric. From my point of view, both notions are equally important for the children’s upbringing not only for

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sake of them but

also

for the

society

.

First

of all,

parents

are the

first

ones who have been in touch with their

offsprings

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since a very young age.

Parents

’ behaviours can contribute and make huge impacts on children’s moral stage.

Subsequently

, youngsters need to learn physical, mental and even spiritual manners at home as

this

could affect their personalities and get along with their lifetimes.

Moreover

, most children are likely to copy their

parents

’ words and behaviours .

Hence

, it is crucial that

parents

need to behave correctly in their

society

.

On the other hand

,

schools

also

have

obligations

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to shape youngsters’ mindsets since their main aim is to make

well educated

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and wise persons

to

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the

community

. Since young ones reach

schools

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, they have a larger environment than that of

homes

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and need to communicate with more different types of people in the

community

.

This

can

also

teach them some kinds of social skills.

Furthermore

, teachers know well the teaching techniques of training students how to become educated and well mindful adults.

For instance

, morality lessons and sociology are

must learned

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subjects at

schools

which can

instill

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the mindset of being empathetic,

well disciplined

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and knowing the basic standards of

society

. In conclusion, futuring youngs to become good citizens is really

provital

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vital

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for the future of our

society

. In my opinion, both

parents

and teachers at

schools

have the obligation

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upbringing children to have high standards and

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them not to be involved in crimes which can impact badly on our

community

.