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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance, for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

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More and more
people
 are talking about whether there are possibilities that one can become an expert on sports or music when they are taught in their childhood, while some
people
 assume that
people
 have a gift for their own interests. The issue is still up for debate. From my point of view, I agree with the opinion that everyone has their own talents. The essay will examine the different points of both views and conclude shortly with my opinion.
First
 of all, some
people
 assert that children are better learners than adults. The reason why is that kids are like a piece of paper, they obey everything that a trainer tells them to do. With pure
attemption
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attention
, Childs can learn skills easily. In stark contrast, adults have more original ideas and
experience
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experiences
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 that may influence the results when they are learning.
For example
, if a man is often depressed by his experience, he may lose most of his confidence when he learns new things.
As a result
, it is said that children can be taught better to become experts.
However
, I totally disagree with the statement.
Although
 there are still some possibilities that children have a pure heart to be familiar with a new skill, in reality, lots of
people
 change their interests when they grow up. According to the latest statistics conducted by the Ministry of Education in Taiwan, a significant number of the local elementary students feeling a lot of pressure increased in 2021 owing to being forced to learn new talents.
Therefore
, even if we force a child who has no interest to learn sports, art or music, it ends up being frustrating.
Although
 learning skills from childhood might be quicker than adults, we should depend on their borned interests and it should not be overlooked.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Nurture
  • Prodigy
  • Proficiency
  • Deliberate practice
  • Physiological factors
  • Grit
  • Perseverance
  • Cultural norms
  • Structured training
  • Physical predisposition
  • Natural aptitude
  • Dedicated training
  • Societal influence
  • Passion
  • Genetic endowment
  • Skill acquisition
  • Expertise
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Mastery
  • Cognitive abilities
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