You have recently applied for a course at a college and have been accepted. However, you cannot join the course due to some reasons. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter: which course you have been applied for why you cannot join the course ask about the possibility of the course in the future Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear sir/madam,
First
of ,all I am thanking you for accepting my application for joining the graduation course at your college, starting
next
month. Unfortunately, I could not attend the class from
next
month, due to some personal problems. I have had a keen interest in learning computer science since my childhood, which forced me to apply to the best college in my state.
Although
your college provides the best teaching faculty, the fee structure is a burden for a person like me who comes from the outskirts of the city.
Furthermore
, my enquire about the scholarships for the applied course are currently not available for
this
academic
year
. According to these ,reasons I cannot join the course
this
academic
year
.
However
, I would arrange the educational loan and it will be granted to me
next
year
. So, If it is possible I am requesting you to consider my application for the
next
academic
year
. It will be a great support for me to achieve my dream to become a graduate in computer science. I am waiting for your valuable reply. Yours sincerely, David John
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