The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having one language in the world?

The popularity of tourism all over the world is playing a vital role
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being
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English
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English
language
superior
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any other
language
.
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, It is thought that English will be the only used
language
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the world.
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I will discuss the positive and negative aspects of
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argument
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argument
. On
one
hand, using English by individuals is playing a
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crucial
crusial
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crucial
role for international students around the world, by exchanging cultures and engaging themselves in
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foreign
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societies
.
For example
, while the number of overseas students is increasing dramatically, most
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German
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universities have recently announced
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more than twenty educational
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taught
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taught
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English in each
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feild
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of study.
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spoken
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disappearing
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disappearing
for most significant historical cultures
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, It is observed how some governments are trying to preserve their previous history through keeping the native
language
as a fundamental subject during all educational stages.
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Arami
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which discovered two hundred years ago. To conclude,
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the positive impacts of using
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internationally
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societies
socities
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societies
and
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organizations
organizaions
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organisations
to
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raise
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awareness
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awareness
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using
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language
more rather than other languages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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