Universities should enrol equal numbers of male and female studentsin all subjects.Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that the quantity of the
students
should be the same
in
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man
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men
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and women in all subjects of tertiary education.I agree that both
gender
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should have the same right to get enrolled, but it is not necessary to take
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far. On the one hand, it is a response to equalised society and has a positive impact on the
innovatioin
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innovation
. There are more male
students
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studying
studing
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studying
in some subjects
such
as physics, with
this
intervention, the class could be more balanced. More insights and ideas could be shared by women which may lead to a new solution. At the same time, it offers more social opportunity for male
students
to interact with female classmates, which help them to ease
the
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anxiety and shyness
socialising
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with the opposite sex.
Consequently
, it could help them to be more ready for the environment once they join the workforce.
On the other hand
, there are
also
drawbacks
by
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implementing
this
rule.
Firstly
, it might create discrimination problems.
For instance
, some universities may turn down
a
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application only because there is no more place for a male student even though he has the talent for
this
subject.
Secondly
, the enrollment could not even be completed due to the acute shortage of applicants
in
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either
of
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the
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either
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gender.
Finally
, boys and girls are born with different advantages and disadvantages and they
also
show
interests
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interest
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in different things.
For example
, statistically, boys are more interested in logical lessons
such
as information technology while girls are more
capatived
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captivated
captive
by
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arts. In conclusion, acceptance of male and female
students
in all subjects is necessary but it does not need to be in equal
number
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numbers
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.
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