Nowadays in many countries traditional customs are less popular than in the past. Do you agree or disagree? What can parents and teachers do about this?

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of every nation. In recent years

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, customs are losing their popularity among the citizens compared to the losing days. I believe

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as well as globalization and

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can be controlled through the help

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parent and teacher, by creating time to pass on old rituals to their

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in their curriculums. Traditional values are becoming the things of the past in our society

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work schedule, as every individual is working to meet up to daily demands creating little or no time to perform the traditional rituals of the past resulting

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being unable to forward them to the younger generations.

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, the world has become a global village where people from different

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of the working are interacting and integrating due to the help of technology

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, resulting

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the imitation of western culture thereby neglecting their original customs.

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, a larger population of

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now want to dress like the Americans for

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reason, forgetting their own traditional dresses.

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with the assistant the guidance. Parents are the primary contact

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a child has and they tend to learn from them. They should create a time when the traditions can be passed on to

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, going to the accent museums and attending festivals. The children can gain knowledge about the past customs from

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.

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, schools can include the native cultures in the curriculum wherefore learning about the cultural practices and putting them into action. In conclusion, traditional values are becoming extinct today, but

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and teachers should help to imbibe

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onto the younger ones.