In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the 21st ,century many vehicles are driven by self. In the upcoming year, the number of vehicles

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as cars, buses and trucks will be fully automatic. Only passengers can be allowed inside the

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of merits as compared to demerits. Which, I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.

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with, driverless

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works on different kinds of electrical equipment

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as sensor, radar, gladiator and surrounding camera.

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equipment works well in any weather or situation.

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, we know about human eyesight cannot see properly during the

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. Which caused the ratio of an accident is increased.

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, a driverless

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totally works on camera and sensors so that it is very safe as compared to human judgment. Apart from

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, the automated

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is safer than a manual

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because, meanwhile the foggy atmosphere, we cannot see the road and the object.

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, an accident occurs.

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an automated

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has a sensor it detects the other cars and applies the brake.

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, the autonomous

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is preventive.

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, these vehicles run based on a speed limit that way it takes a longer time to rich our destination but the proportion of the safety is

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, it has a few disadvantages

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this

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car

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is totally operated on electrical components. During the monsoon

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it is possible to break down the vehicle. To conclude,

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autonomous

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has more benefits

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compared to now. An accident of low risk to the passengers as well as safer. That’s why

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this

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driverless

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is perfect for travelling.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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