Questions: In many countries it is now illegal to advertise alcohol. Do you agree or disagee?

Advertising methanol is now prohibited in many nations.

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essay disagrees with the idea because

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alcohol

companies have the

rights

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to promote their products and goods in proper ways,

also

beers and liqueurs have been playing a big role in economic progress for decades.

Alcohol

businesses and companies should be allowed to make appropriate ads on their goods freely. Since

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advertisement is a relatively effective method to grow any business,

therefore

, having the announcement of the products either on television or in publications with good timing and places should be very acceptable.

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, in Thailand,

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a brand of beer is always advertised on TV at night after 10 P.M. with some small details related indirectly to their goods.

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other example is that the wine posters are always seen only in the pub areas, which means that no children or teenagers easily see them. Liqueurs

also

have a significant role in the economy. People tend to drink

alcohol

when they go to hang out or parties, it is a part of the fun, so people often purchase it

similarly

as a side dish.

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, nowadays, there are lots of bars

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offer variations of affordable beers and wines and those who are methanol lovers consistently seem to be convinced

in buying

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them. In conclusion, all types of

alcohol

Ads are not supposed to be illegal in any

nations

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due to

the rights in the marketing of the brands,

moreover

, its high demand can drive the economy

forwards

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