In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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population in the world and the development of economics, people in some countries believe that owning a home is better than renting one. In my opinion, I prefer it is relatively a positive situation and in

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essay, we will discuss

pros

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and cons of it. To start with, buying a home means there will be less worry

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the

rent

. Nowadays, in many big

cities

, the young employees who just graduated from their

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universities

univeristies

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universities

will usually worry about the cost of living in big

cities

, and the

rent

often takes

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unavoidably massive part.

However

, if they already owned a

house

, paying

rent

would not be an obstacle

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working in big

cities

. What's more, as the time passes, the

house

's value will keep increasing,

residents

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who own houses can sell them when they are going to leave. To exemplify that, an apartment in the

center

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of Guangzhou had a price of 2000

Yuan

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per square meter, but it has risen to 70000 Yuan per square meter now.

Secondly

, I believe it is a relatively positive situation. In order to buy their own home, individuals tend to work hard in their companies,

this

will contribute greatly to their

cities

' development. And the government could use the profit to improve

city's

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infrastructure,

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education

eduation

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education

, public traffic, etc.

For example

, Shenzhen was a small fishing village in the past, but thanks to the workers and

employees's

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hard

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working

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, now it has become one of the largest and most famous

cities

in the world.

Besides

,

this

will help

city's

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population keep stable, individuals are free to go and have a job everywhere until they decide to live in the

city

for

long

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term.

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city's

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population become stable, it would be possible to have development. To summarize, the desire of getting rid of

rent

and landlord, and the increasing value of the

house

have become the reasons

to

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the question of why people argue

of

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whether buy a

house

or

rent

one. And I believe

this

is a positive situation since it helps

cities

develop and become better.