Nowadays, some countries are spending a lot of money to make it easier to use a bicycle. Why is this so? Is it the best solution to the transport problem?
In the modern era of times, administrations are more concerned
to knock
down the Change preposition
with knocking
transportation
problem without Use synonyms
making
any harm to the environment. In many parts Verb problem
causing
around
the globe, a lot of investment has been made to make the use of bicycles more convenient. Change preposition
of
This
essay will try to answer why the governments are doing so and Linking Words
also
discuss whether it is the best solution to the Linking Words
transportation
issue or not.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, the administrations are looking for an environment-friendly Linking Words
transportation
system. All over the world, the authorities are spending a huge sum of money on developing separate tracks for bikers because it is the only vehicle in the world that does not burn fossil fuel, say, petrol, octane, and so on. That’s why governments all around the globe have targeted Use synonyms
this
mode of Linking Words
transportation
so that by popularizing it they can demolish Use synonyms
transportation
issues without damaging the surrounding environment. Use synonyms
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, popularizing bikes has some health benefits. Linking Words
That is
to say, one can stay fit if Linking Words
they
Correct pronoun usage
one
use
a bicycle Correct subject-verb agreement
uses
instead
of Linking Words
their
private car. Change the word
a
Hence
, they can overcome some serious health problems, Linking Words
for example
, obesity, overweight, and even many more.
In response to the second question, I must say it is not the best way to tackle the issue of Linking Words
transportation
because of two reasons. Use synonyms
Firstly
, a two-wheeler is just a simple vehicle that can not carry more than a person. That’s why, when it comes to the question Linking Words
to deal
with Change preposition
of dealing
transportation
problems, Use synonyms
Linking Words
then
authorities should think of public modes of Rephrase
apply
vehicles
, Fix the agreement mistake
vehicle
for instance
, trains, trams, and so on as they can move more than 50 persons and sometimes even more. Linking Words
Secondly
, the administration can cut a significant amount of the automobile tax so that each and every citizen Linking Words
could
afford a family vehicle, say, a car. If they could do so, the Wrong verb form
can
transportation
problem would definitely Use synonyms
reduce
.
Wrong verb form
be reduced
To sum up
, many countries are spending a lot of money to make the bicycle more convenient to use because it is eco-friendly Linking Words
as well as
Linking Words
it
has some obvious health benefits. Correct pronoun usage
apply
However
, I guess it is not the best way to overcome the issue of Linking Words
transportation
.Use synonyms
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