Why do you select your preferred major choice and 2nd major choice?

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Becoming a businesswoman has been my big dream since I was a child. My family runs a furniture factory and exports to Europe. My parents did not think that a girl like me can become a businesswoman since it is so challenging.
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, just changed their mind by my accomplishments. By studying abroad, I learned it is essential to implement what I learned from the books into action or an experiment. I hope
to begin
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my own
business
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in the future and will continue to pursue that dream at WP Carey School of
Business
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. Based on the program at WP Carey School of
Business
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, I believed that
Business
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entrepreneurship is the major that supports building an excellent foundation and extending
business
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knowledge. By completing, I would understand the requirements of an entrepreneur and be able to identify market opportunities. I earn more strategies for my future
business
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and more social networking. My
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major in accountancy since it plays a critical role in any
business
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. According to Warrant Buffett, “Accounting is the language of
business
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”. The company cannot miss the work of the accounting. By becoming an accountant, I will understand deeper the operation of the company, and be able to learn more skills for my future life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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