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Newspapers and books are outdated. Why do some people believe this? What is your opinion?

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As we move into the 21st century, an increasing number of
people
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 have begun to believe that
books
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 and
newspapers
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 are not just less popular but considerably outdated. There are some valid reasons for
people
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 to think so.
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, I am quite unconvinced and so disagree with the statement. The reasons for
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's perceptions and my opinion are discussed
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. Referring to
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's view, the principal reason for them to believe so is due to the technological advances in
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 aspect. With the advent of television and the internet, getting information or entertainment has become the quickest, easiest, and the audio-visual manner. The news on the Media is updated hourly and sometimes there is live coverage too.
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 does not happen in the case of
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, they contain what is called yesterday's news once published.
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, in the case of
books
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, fewer
people
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 choose to read for pleasure nowadays.
People
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 want instant gratification and three of the modern technology rather than reading a book.
People
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 certainly prefer to watch a 3-D movie or play a video game. Explaining my opinion, the foremost argument I shall put forward is that the
newspapers
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 would never go out of fashion completely.
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 is because they serve as a basic need of
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 and are an important part of
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's lives.
Newspapers
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 or for all types of news can be in the relational language, can be carried anywhere, and are quite expensive. For
books
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, it can be said that those for our word from friendly and want creative thinking still read
books
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.
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, it is quite evident that
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 are even today used in all academic and non-academic institutions as study material. All in all, it can be said that though numbers of newspaper readers and book lovers have decreased
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 to those using technology for the same purpose, I faithfully believe that paper-based paper-based materials shall never be out of fashion.
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