Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
The increase in the current
industry
factory has caused global warming because there is a lot of emission Use synonyms
pollution
. Some Use synonyms
people
think that Use synonyms
this
problem should be solved by increasing the Linking Words
industry
tax. Use synonyms
While
others disagree with Linking Words
this
idea and think that there are better solutions. In the following paragraphs, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before a conclusion is reached.
It is undeniable that Linking Words
industry
factories are the main factor that affects the environment. Use synonyms
For example
, air Linking Words
pollution
causes Carbon monoxide or Nitrogen dioxide and greenhouse gas emissions. Which is a substance that causes harm to Use synonyms
people
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, The release of wastewater into rivers and oceans leads to a negative impact on water creatures. So some Linking Words
people
believe that the government ought to collect increased taxes on Use synonyms
industry
factories to reduce Use synonyms
pollution
problems. To illustrate, It will reduce unused litter and manufacture fewer unnecessary materials.
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On the other hand
, some Linking Words
people
think that there are many ways to reduce Use synonyms
pollution
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, there is a measure for determining the standard value emission of Linking Words
industry
factories Use synonyms
such
as the chemical and oil industries to control volatile emissions. Linking Words
Secondly
, use a water removal and treatment system by bringing in technology to help prevent wastewater. Linking Words
Finally
, adding green areas to help improve air quality Linking Words
also
helps to cool the air. Linking Words
For example
, Germany designed roofs and walls to be green spaces that can filter up to 200 tons per day.
In conclusion, Linking Words
according to
my point of view, the government needs to take action to solve Linking Words
this
problem immediately. Linking Words
Although
taxation has little effect on reducing Linking Words
pollution
, it can be done Use synonyms
together with
other methods for greater efficiency.Linking Words
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task achievement
The essay covers both perspectives and gives a personal opinion, showing a balanced discussion.
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