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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are causes? And wat will be effects on society?

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The number of
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 enrolling to
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 a
science
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course
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 has been at the trough in some
countries
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. Factors responsible for these continuous trends and their societal implications will be discussed in
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 with, poor orientation to the sciences is a major reason why
students
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 don't want to
study
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 them.
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 in Nigeria, there is a common myth that says only intelligent
students
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 who are excellent in maths can do well in a
science
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 subject . Wrong information like
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 will only instil fear in the mind of
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 interested in the discipline and
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 has led to many
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 avoiding the
course
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. Another significant factor contributing to
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 situation is insufficient employment opportunities for
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students
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 in
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countries
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.
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 ,in a situation where graduates of
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 subjects are the most unemployed in the community , young people will prefer to
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 a more lucrative
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. The subsequent consequences of not studying the sciences are innumerable .
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, there will be a delay in
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 and technological advancement. There will be no development in the country and it will result in depending on other nations' scientific development.
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, the community will remain a burden to developed nations to supply its technological requirements.
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, Nigeria being a developing nation depends on other developed
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such
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 as Japan and China to meet its technological needs making it a burden to developed
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.
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 involves spending a lot of money on importing technological devices from developed
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 to optimize the quality of life for its citizens. In conclusion , inappropriate orientation to the sciences and absence or reduced job privileges are some of the reasons why
students
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 refuse to
study
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 a
science
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-related
course
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 while the societal implications are delayed development in
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 and technology as well as being a burden to developed nations to meet their
science
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 and technological needs.

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